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The First Kiss - Commission

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This was a commission done by :icondrpickelle: of my OCs Xora Patrone (human female) and Lyrik Castius (male turian) sharing their first kiss. This is the first comic strip I have ever commissioned and I cannot contain my giddiness over this piece. It perfectly captures their moment. <3

:bulletblack: ~DrPickelle
:bulletblack: Commission info: [link]
:bulletblack: The original: [link]
Tell her how awesome she did there

Xora's Story: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]

I have received permission to post it to my profile.

**********Xora Patrone: Chapter 6 Blurb**********

"I love you," he whispered. Lyrik closed his eyes and brought his forehead to meet mine. Feeling his warm breath rushing against my skin, it was still heavy from our sparring. His mouth was closing in onto mine. Our lips barely gazed each other now.

Is this actually happening? Am I dreaming? Am I in a coma from the alcohol? No, he's right there. And this feels so real… But I cannot go anywhere. He has me. What should I do? I can't resist… Should I give in? Can turians even…kiss?

Lyrik locked our lips. I could feel how he was restraining himself. He only came close enough to allow his mouth to greet mine, barely feeling my soft skin touch against his rough opening before he pulled away. It was enough to leave a lingering sensation… leaving me craving for more.

Yes. They can kiss. I… I don't know if it is the liquor, if it is just my emotions speaking, or if there is something more. But… this feeling… it's consuming me…I need another…I NEED to feel his lips against mine again…What am I saying? No, Xora… it's not natural…

He looked at me, hesitation beaconing in his eyes. His confused look studied me, trying to grasp if I would permit more. Unaware if he should continue, he appeared to fighting with himself.

But it felt so good… Maybe… just one more harmless kiss… just one…

My body wanted more, craving whatever he would share. Every breath he took made my hair stand on end. The anticipation tensing, I just wanted his lips on mine again.

Just one more…

"Yes," my voice pleaded as I nudged my nose against his cheek., "Lyrik, please."

Before I could say anything more, he forced himself against me. Binding our mouths together, allowing his tongue to intrude. His grip on my wrists weakened, bringing his hands to cup my face. It wasn't long before my body accepted him. I couldn't control myself anymore. As much as I wanted to believe it was wrong for our species to mingle… it all felt so natural. The more he shared, the more I desired.
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garrus368's avatar
Nice,will be more?